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Why a Routine is Important | The Trick to Rejections | Plotting for Pantsters

Why a Routine is Important
woman in chairWorking from home can be, in a word, challenging. Between the dogs barking at the dust balls floating across the floor, the cats sending faxes to China, the teenagers inviting the neighborhood kids in for Hot Pockets and Doritos, things aren’t exactly quiet at my house.

Which is why a regular routine is essential.

When developing a routine, start by doing a personal inventory of your writing habits. Are you most productive first thing in the morning, late at night, or during the afternoon? I’m referring to the first draft writing aspect of the process because for me, revising can be done anytime.

I’ve resigned myself to the fact that, for me, writing in the morning is about effective as skating on quicksand. It just ain’t happening. Keep track of when you get the most pages written, the time of day you’re really in the zone, and see if there’s a pattern. Capitalize on your physiology’s natural routine; don’t fight it. Yes, that means if you’re most productive between three and seven in the afternoon the kids are going to have to make their own dinner.

Once you’ve figured out when you get your best work done, carve out that piece of your day, every day, to write.

Let’s say you’re a morning writer (I envy you). Set your alarm and get up and write your pages for whatever hours you’ve designated. Have lunch about the same time every day, take your afternoon walk at the same time, etc. Developing a routine stimulates the habit of writing.

What can you do to respect your natural routine? I’ll suggest paying attention to the food you eat. Honestly, I’ve noticed I need a nap shortly after ingesting simple carbs (sugars, white flour, etc). Do certain foods affect you in different ways? I find that protein, veggies and fruits are brain food for me.

Also, pay attention to what triggers your muse. A few things that come to mind: listening to music, taking a daily walk, reading poetry and…vacuuming (I’m not kidding.) Somehow the mindless motion of sucking up tumbleweeds of dog and cat hair seems to stimulate my brain. (Sorry, I’m not coming to your house). Don’t dismiss mindless activity. Think of it as a tool to detach your creative mind from the ever-present critic that lives just beneath the surface, the one that intimidates you into NOT writing your pages.

In my opinion, a routine helps train your brain to tell your body what’s next on the agenda.

Every day at exactly 6:30 p.m., my golden retriever sits in the middle of the kitchen, waiting for his arthritis pill. It’s his routine. Wouldn’t it be great if at 9 a.m., every day, your brain automatically clicked into writing mode and words spilled out onto the page? It’s possible. You just have to create a routine in sync with your body’s natural physiology.

Good luck!

The Trick to Rejection
Rejections. They’re horrible. Gut wrenching. Devastating. And reading them is a complete waste of your energy.

rejectionOr is it?

Sure, when you first get your rejection letter, describing in detail what’s wrong with your heroine, your plot, your writing style, your hairstyle; your first reaction is to go face down in a gallon of Moose Tracks ice cream and come out five hours later.

But here’s the trick: give yourself time to throw your tantrum. Get it out of your system. Drink your red wine, eat your chocolate (or even better, dip the chocolate in the red wine), stomp around the house, throw darts at the publisher’s website, yes, even shout back at the letter if you have to.

Whew, once that’s over, play a game of “a friend of mine just got this letter and I need to help her learn from it.”

I’m not kidding.

And no, I’m not drunk.

With a fresh, objective eye, read it again, considering each criticism as a lesson. These rejections are all your teachers, sharing insight that will make you a better writer. That said, please disregard the letters that include comments like “you shouldn’t waste anymore trees by trying to write.” I call these “diseased” and they need to be destroyed so the disease won’t spread.

Onto a few lessons I’ve learned from rejections.

Lesson one: When an editor says “There’s not enough conflict in your story” guess what? There’s probably not enough conflict in your story. Remember, no conflict, no story. Nada. Nothing. Conflict is, in my opinion, the pulse that keeps your story beating. A great reference book on conflict is Deb Dixon’s Goal, Motivation, and Conflict.

Lesson Two: When an editor writes, “I’d be happy to accept submissions from you in the future” she is not kidding and you’d better send her something else. Honest. Editors don’t have time to be nice and make friends with Amanda Author. They recognize something they like when they see it. If they see it in your voice, and ask for it again, send something.

Lesson Three: Don’t take it personally. HA! You knew that was coming. Publishing is a business and the goal is to make money. An editor wants to buy authors who are going to sell lots of books and make the publisher lots of money. Simple. You may not have what they think will sell this month, but six months down the line, your writing will be that much better and the tide may have changed and they’re suddenly looking for books like yours.
Accept rejections as road signs directing you to your ultimate destination: publication!

© 2006, Pat White

Plotting for Pantsers

Ever since I started writing fiction in 1995 I was the type of author that saw the opening scene play out in my head and had to get it down on the page. Once there, I kept following the twists and turns until I finally came out the other end, in need of therapy, yes, but usually with a pretty decent first draft.

As my production increased, and I found myself writing up to four books a year, I figured out that being a pantser, or “writing blind” as I call it, may not be the most effective method of writing a book. Why? Because I spend an unnecessary amount of time stressing about what’s going to happen next.

Yes, fellow pantsers, I’m a traitor. I decided to explore plotting possibilities and discovered a story structure method by a screenwriter that made sense to me.

The screenwriter is Blake Synder and is book is called Save the Cat:  The Last Book on Screenwriting You'll Ever Need.  It outlines fifteen points that all movies hit during their 110 page scripts. This book is really worth having, in my opinion, because it also explains how to write a logline (high concept description of your story) which is a great tool in selling your concept to an editor.

Back to plotting for pantsers. There are tons of ways to plot. The following is what’s working for me…this week.

Know your theme
With a strong theme everything seems to fall into place. Themes are things like “What’s real is what’s in your heart” or “Compassion is the key to healing.”

Create a Solid Opening Image
Make it a grabber. Also, I like to have the opening image relate to the closing image. It brings the story full circle. This end image should be the antithesis of the opener to show character transformation.

First Act
This is your set up. Who is everyone and why are they here? (Goal, motivation, conflict. You know the drill.)

Turn into Act II (1/4 way through the book)
We leave the old world and move into the opposite of that. Blake Snyder mentions the “fun and games” part of your story as being in this section. It’s the promise of a premise, those colorful scenes that stick with your reader visually. I’m thinking Elle Woods showing up to a Harvard party dressed as a bunny in LEGALLY BLOND or Bruce Wayne taking out two-dozen bad guys at the docks in BATMAN BEGINS.

Halfway point
Stakes are raised! There can be a false victory or defeat, but either way something big happens here.

Bad Guys Close in
The forces aligned against the hero tighten their grip. The hero is on his own in search of victory.

All is Lost
Or Blake calls it, the whiff of death, which is closely followed by...

Dark Night of the Soul
It’s the point just before the hero reaches deep down to find the solution to the crisis.

Break into three (3/4 way through your book)
Your hero has found a solution to his problem and the world has changed. We’re into a new world now and moving toward the...

Finale
Everything is wrapped up, questions are answered, and bad guys are beaten.

This is a shortened version of Blake’s 15 point Beat Sheet. The Beat Sheet helped me visually understand what a story looks like beyond the words floating on my computer screen. I was able to take a step back and see the big picture.

But as I said, different things work for different authors. Just know that it IS possible for a pantser to benefit from a little plotting. Hey, if it takes the fear factor out of the process it’s worth a try!

© 2007, Pat White